This is the third time in a row buuut I think I'm satisfied with how he's turning out so far! The main reason I didn't like his first two drafts was because his personality was a little...cliche??? Like the first one was an angry alcoholic cause yeah why not and the second one was just the meek mentally ill dude trope. So I'm trying to give him some more depth by re-writing his backstory and shit. I based his new backstory off this song here
hue. I like writing sad boys.